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Monday, June 1, 2015
Cold
Shivering breath
Glass with cold nature's kiss
Down insulating soft coats
Breathy tounges of
Smoke from rust colored chimneys
Braile dotting arms
Cold
You write amazing poems. I love the line "braille dotting arms". Your imagery is so unique which is hard because I feel like its easy to slip into clichés. Excellent.
I like the feeling of this!
ReplyDeleteYou write amazing poems. I love the line "braille dotting arms". Your imagery is so unique which is hard because I feel like its easy to slip into clichés. Excellent.
ReplyDeleteThis is great, you used some awesome ideas!
ReplyDeletethis was just honestly so amazing :)
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